Monday, 3 December 2012

Welcome & Part 1

Hello Everyone:D

This is my first FF on Shanak, blog is request from my dear friend, Heer, im posting all the parts over here, i know many won't be commenting, as they have already done commenting, asking questions, enjoying them and all, so im just posting it:D
If any new people are willing to comment, im much obliged:D
So here it goes....

Introduction-

Dr.Shaantanu Khandelwal, is a pediatrician (child specialist), was working in London, now he's back in India, with his parents Sunil and Madhvi Khandelwal. He's got job in Mumbai Government Hospital, he wanted to help the poor, so he'll be visiting hospital often, but not that often as he has his own clinic. He is not yet married, he's still single. He was so much engrossed in living his dreams; he never thought to get married nor to have a girlfriend. His parents were worried for him, but he had now lost the thought of marriage. He's just engrossed in his work. His brother, Akshay and Khushboo bhabhi are staying in London, but they would be coming to India early. Though Shaan stayed in London, he respects his culture and loves his family a lot.

Dr.Khanak Mishra, is still practising, she's still doing her last year of Post graduation in Mumbai Government Hospital.Since its a govt. hospital, she's getting her stipend (salary). She's got only one person for herself in the whole world, that's Aayush, her brother's son. She had lost her family in an accident, only she and aayush had survived the accident. When she had lost her parents, aayush was 4yr old and that yr was her first yr of post graduation. She had to take care of herself and importantly Aayush. Now she was like mother for him. In first yr she found it difficult to take care of aayush and her studies, later on she had got used to it, Aayush's her strength, he's a good support for her, we can say that she's living only for him, 2yrs have past now, still the thought bring tears to her eyes. She had also left the house, in which her childhood was spent and now she's staying in an apartment with aayush, which was gifted by her brother.

Part1
A beautiful Monday morning in Mumbai, it will be first day for Dr.Shantanu Khandelwal in Mumbai Govt. hospital, he had opened his clinic last month ago, but he had gained lot of popularity for his work. He's in his room getting ready to go to hospital, his father enters in,
Shaan: Hey dad, good morning, kya baat hain, subah subah aap mere kamre main??? Phir se aapne mom se jhagda kiya??(jokes)Sunil: woh to hamesha rehtha hain(smiles), so ur ready???
Shaan: yep!!! Shaan is ready by now but he's searching something in cupboard.
Sunil: ab kya doond rahe ho???Shaan: kuch nahi dad, aah mil gaya (he shows his pendrive).
Sunil: toh chalo, saath mein breakfast karte hain. 
Shaan smiles and both of them leave the room. Madhvi is in the dining hall, all 3 of them sit for their breakfast.
Madhvi: Shaan tumne photos dekh liya???
Shaan: mom please I've said that I'm not interested.Madhvi: lekin Shaan (stopped by sunil).
Sunil: Shaan photo dekhne main kaisi problem ho sakthi hain????Shaan: dad abhi nahi, baad mein(gets up to leave)
Madhvi: Shaan aisa nahi chalega(strictly) Shaan runs out.Shaan: mom raat ko baat karte hain. Saying that he runs out.
Madhvi: pata nahi yeh ladka kab sudhrega, both Madhvi and Sunil are worried.
Khanak,had to reach two places today, first Aayush's school and to the hospital. She had waken aayush, got him ready to leave him to the school.
Khanak(from kitchen): aayush r u ready???
Aayush: (comes running into kitchen) yes mom!!!Khanak: very good, mera hero tho ready hogaya, ab chalo jaldi se khaalo, tumhari aaj
parent teachers meeting hain na??? (He just nods while eating) tho mein meeting ke baad hospital chali jaaongi, and mujhe pata hain ki meri Aayush ka report card sabse best hogi(she picks him up) 

She hugs him, even he hugs her.
Aayush: mom dad hothe tho bahut khush hote na???Khanak(wipes her tears): aur main kaun hun???
Aayush: sorry mom (holds his ears)
Khanak: abhi bi woh bahut khush hain tumhare liye aur mere liye.
Pecks him on his cheek. Both of them leave the house, happily. She holds his hand in one hand and her other hand is carrying her laptop bag and her accessories. She had informed in the hospital that she'll be late'

In the hospital, he's in the cabin of senior doctor, Dr.Lata Sheshadri. He's introduced to all the staff. He's now sitting in her cabin.

Dr.Lata: so Dr. Shaan all set???
Shaan: oohh yes, and thanks for such a warm welcome.
Lata: oh no problem. 
Knock on her door, its Dr.Raj, he's a very good friend of Khanak, and her colleague.
Raj: sorry maam, woh main khanak ke bare main poochne aaya tha, uska phone bi nahi lag raha hain, had she called you???Lata: Shaayad aap bhool rahe ho Dr.Raj, aaj Aayush ka parent teachers meeting hain, she'll finish with that and then she'll come. (Smiles)
Raj: Oh ya actually I'd forgotten that, sorry for disturbing. 
He leaves, Shaan has no idea who's khanak, so he keeps quiet. He goes out with lata to see the wards and to see his cabin. There comes a girl, she's wearing a white coat and steth hung around her neck, her hairs are flowing in the air, she's walking towards him, he's never seen a girl so simple, and that big brown eyes, which can attract anyone towards her, something about her look, he feels serene.
Khanak: sorry maam, thoda sa late hogayi, u know Mumbai ka traffic (shrugs) (smiles)
Lata: its ok Khanak, now get going on the duty, and ya Raj was asking for you. Khanak: sure maam.
Lata: ek minute Khanak, this is Dr.Shantanu KhandelwalKhanak: Hello Doctor (smiles at him), I'm Dr.Khanak, in 3rd yr.
Shaan: nice to meet you Dr.Khanak (hands are shaken)Khanak: Ok then maam (she leaves)
Shaan is just looking at her going away.

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3 comments:

  1. hey:D
    i guess i've removed the word verification part, now you can comment freely:D

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  2. Thank u for removing code verification :) was trying yestersday nite
    yuppiiiee!!!! me first heheh
    read n fall in love with Raabta once again ♥♥♥
    love the description of character
    feel bad for Khanak
    she lost her parents in accident only she n Aayush survive n she took care of him like his own parents
    poor Madhvi shaan make excuse to see a girl photo
    dont worry madhvi khanak hai nah lolzz
    love Khanak n Aayush small talk which was touchy when Aayush mention his dad
    shaan is cleanball seeing khanak n he admire her simplicity wow!!! pehle madhvi jaab kaha photo dekhlo u make excuse n nw seen khanak at first time admire her
    sahi jaraheho heheheh!!
    its quarter to 12 n m reading Raabta heheh
    feels good to read from d begining
    gng to read nxt part
    this was awesomr i loved it ♥♥♥♥

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